the form is cool, but the boards could convey the function more. I know it records somehow, but i'm not sure how. Also, there's no point in having an additional view of the product in the photo if it's no bigger than in the original pic (in the underwater one i think it's actually smaller). I'd try to find a higher res pic and zoom in on the product a bit. you don't need a whole mountain shot to convey that this thing goes on a bike frame.
overall I like it, it seems like a cool idea, could just use more explanation
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yeah alias!
the form is cool, but the boards could convey the function more. I know it records somehow, but i'm not sure how. Also, there's no point in having an additional view of the product in the photo if it's no bigger than in the original pic (in the underwater one i think it's actually smaller). I'd try to find a higher res pic and zoom in on the product a bit. you don't need a whole mountain shot to convey that this thing goes on a bike frame.
overall I like it, it seems like a cool idea, could just use more explanation
sweet, thanks. I'm not sure if I'm gonna work on it more, though, but i have soe of my portfolio stuff coming soon
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